I feel you and your thoughts float into mine.
a woven cloth are we together then,
you know exactly of my what and when,
our threads of thoughts may always intertwine.
I hold back nothing, when we are alone,
you open up, there are no guessing games,
we watch the birds without knowing their names,
to us the only meaning is their tone.
We try to keep togetherness and such,
when often you and I are far apart,
too far to feel the beating of your heart
too far to say you matter to me much.
We cherish every moment that we got
together, when we are, and when weβre not.
Comments on: "Togetherness" (10)
Beautifully written, Ina.
Hi William, thank you very much! π
Great passion from the heart Ina!
Hi Wendell, thank you! π
Beautiful thoughts and I envy those who may enjoy such a relationship. On the other hand, mental health protocols suggest that it may be dangerous and unhealthy to create a self identity contingent on being connect to any person, place or thing and there are many reasons why. On the other, other hand my parents will be married 67 years in November.
Hi Carl
thank you very much!
I take my chances on the danger part π as there is no greater joy for the self than to be connected with an other self. I think.
67 years, now that is amazing! π https://sites.google.com/site/weddinganniversarygiftsbyyear/anniversary-symbol/anniversary-symbol-for-52nd-to-67th Star saphire seems to be the gift for this rare occasion! I hope it will happen!
Insightful and beautiful commentary on interpersonal relationships. Nicely done Ina.
Hi Walter
thank you very much!
‘we watch the birds without knowing their names,
to us the only meaning is their tone.’
Adore those lines, Ina!
Thank you Diane! π