1
we modified wolf
killed its instinct to eat us
we so love nature
*
2
cat watching the bird
the sound of tinopener
gone is the instinct
*
3
some moments are like that
two minds loving each other
honoured with a smile
*
4
nights without loving
cold shivering are my dreams
waiting for your hands
WAKING UP FROM THIS NIGHTMARE
loving hands waiting
nights shivering without cold
for my dreams are you
*5
the birds in the cage
thinking the same thing I do:
bars blocking the view
*6
blue skies over gold
a promise in the morning
but evening will be grey
*7
we both on that road
how the tarmac burnt our feet
never we went back
*8
when I was writing
I forgot I was writing
as it was living
*
9
maybe it is true
sex is communication
you stutter a lot
*
10
standing is this tree
awaiting a new Sunrise
that comes as always
*
11
wise old men know this
going for a pee at nights
sleep in much better
Comments on: "Haiku Senryu Naisaiku" (12)
Excellent.
Thank you Duncan! 🙂
our relationship with the natural world, lovely images, and some humor
Thank you Ray! 🙂
Sharp, unique slants that do great justice to the form. Enjoyed.
Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed!
Wonderful, Ina, and my favorites are 4,5,9 & 10! xx
Thank you very much Lauren! 🙂
Simply a pleasure to visit your site and read your words
Thank you very much 🙂
I like number 5 best.
Thank you Kev! 🙂