Of all the poems
The storm could write
It chose the one
About you and me
When we took shelter
And with every line it wrote
More of you vanished into leaves
Away from me forever


Comments on: "Storm" (12)

  1. Excellent imagery, Ina

  2. This is very, very beautiful. Even the sadness has a beauty all it’s own.

  3. I echo Nicodemas. This a poem of autumn for sure, transitions and the safe beauty of the cycle of change. Sometimes you outdo yourself Ina, this is one of those times…

    • Thank you very much John. This poem was written for a thread on the poetry course I am doing. It is a mesostic that reads Lost Love but I didn’t make the letters bold here on the blog 🙂

  4. Ah yes. And then the leaves themselves vanished.

  5. These are very tender lines, Ina.

  6. I like that storms can be imagined to write!

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