I try to talk and words come out a quote;
No matter what I say, they are not heard
As mine, you burn them while I write this note.
So much we spoke about, so loud we wrote;
That you won’t hear me now seems too absurd.
I try to talk and words come out a quote.
Your tired voice just tells me that you’re sad,
Your letters, bleak, polite, and not deterred
As mine, you burn them while I write this note.
Remember all the moments that we had,
Now what is left, reminds me of our flirt.
I try to talk and words come out a quote.
I’m reminiscent, while black clouds afloat.
Regretfully I feel your words, they hurt
As mine, you burn them while I write this note.
We both are dwellers on a different road.
It’s time to move, just speak and say the word.
As mine, you burn them while I write this note.
I try to talk and words come out a quote.
Comments on: "Excommunication" (9)
nice villanelle!
Thank you! I forgot how to call the form lol
Your works are amazingly beautiful and I would like to nominate you for Liebster Blog Award. Check this out- http://stringsofsoulfulness.wordpress.com/2014/09/16/two-more-honors-to-cherish/
Thank you very much! I am very grateful for the nomination! π
My Pleasure! Please click on the link given and follow the rules. Do comment on the original link so that people may see who you are.
Hi John, I tried the link but it gives some problems with my fire wall π¦
When I click it on your blog it works! I will email it to you…
Thank you John! What a lovely song. Thank you also for your email! π