during the sunset

during the sunset
all fire alarms went off
exaggeration

during the sunset
you didn’t blink at all
an understatement

last view of this life
a good time to ponder
during the sunset

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Comments on: "during the sunset" (4)

  1. Liked the repetition in this! A few typos, it should be “exaggeration” and I think you mean “sunset.” =)

  2. Sometimes you write something very simple like this that is, in its own way, truly amazing.

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