You dimmed the light

I slipped out of something comfortable;
you dimmed the light.
Was I a sore for the eyes I wonder
or did I just not get it right?

We were together for more than a night,
no one night stand
although I never heard from you again.
There was no start, only an end.



Comments on: "You dimmed the light" (6)

  1. Aw, sad. Love those first two lines! L&H xx

  2. “A sore for the eyes…” is a curious way to say it, but I find it appealing with a poetic sensibility. Nice title.

    • 🙂 Like “slipping out of something comfortable ” instead of in, I wanted to use the phrase “for sore eyes” altered a bit 🙂

  3. I always end up nodding at the tone you convey. Always a pleasure to read. You really are

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: