4 x Jorio

had you seen all
would you be wiser
close your eyes now
see what is within


closer we get talking
you say something funny
it moves me more
than all your whispers


come hide the truth
your lies are better
I know a place
to dig deep holes


Pain keeps me awake –
not thinking of you,
though, is it not
the same, the same?


Comments on: "4 x Jorio" (16)

  1. Very cleverly done. That was great.

  2. Widow Beach said:

    Great, as usual–and thank you for taking the Jorio beyond the 4 lines! I’ve been so wanting to do it, but was shy–now I have permission.

  3. Ah! You’ve joined the Jorio wagon! These are great! L&H xx

  4. No, my friend your lies are better

  5. Yet another new form that’s passed me by! Thank you for sharing these, they’re lovely. Look out for some experiments from me very soon, but they won’t be as good as these! N.x

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