Sea dance

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You sometimes take more space inside my mind,
then roll away to where I can not find,
as if you are an ocean of some kind

Where does the sea begin, where does she end?
The waves are always moving towards sand
in an eternal dance of sea and land.

Comments on: "Sea dance" (14)

  1. Widow Beach said:

    Oh wow, another sea/love one–I LOVE it.

  2. A love song, Ina, that seas waves into a horizon without wind.

  3. Oh I absolutely love this! I must go to the sea soon!! Im craving it and your poems of late are increaing the need!! 😊 L&H xx

    • Thank you Christine. The sea was lovely today, with a bit of mist, you will enjoy a trip there! L&H xx

  4. As always, Ina, the sea is your muse and this is a simply beautiful example of where you poet’s heart and soul are at their best! XO ♥

    • Hi Diane, thank you very much. The sea has a loud voice at times (depending on the wind I suppose) 🙂 ♥ x

  5. Oh, I love this, Ina. Your last line is perfect – the “eternal dance of sea and land”. Beautiful imagery, lovely movement of words!

  6. truly lovely Ina, the ebb and flow of tides within us and around us…

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