October sunrise

Forgotten that I hadnโ€™t come to find,
I found without searching what I got right here
and all of it in one October sunrise on the pier.
My mind just needed to remember.

Comments on: "October sunrise" (8)

  1. Wonderful.

    Absolutely my sort of poem ๐Ÿ™‚

    Arohanui
    David
    xxx

    • Hi David,
      thank you very much!
      Sometimes it just needs some outdoor wisdom to know what is important ๐Ÿ™‚

      Arohanui ๐Ÿ™‚

      xxx

  2. Love this Ina, short, sweet and lovely ๐Ÿ™‚

    L&H xx

    • ๐Ÿ™‚ Thank you Christine, that is the way they are the best lol ๐Ÿ™‚ (poems! I am talking poems!) L&H xx

  3. The poem so perfectly matches the moment it describes … needs only to be the simple revelation that it is. Just lovely. XO

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