Love secrets

It rained all day, it was a cheap hotel.
Well enough for our brief encounter,
a bottle of wine and two plastic cups.
We watched the seagulls mate, this view from our
window made us unable to make love,
we laughed as the birds went on like their
life depended on it. It did somehow.
You nicked the towel as a souvenir.
Now we both know sea gulls do it smiling
and that you have heaps of hotel linen.


Comments on: "Love secrets" (10)

  1. Love this one, it left me with a smile. And I could visualise it well too!

    L&H xx

  2. This captures the episode so well

  3. This is pure, glorious poetry.

  4. Perfecto Ina – as always…

  5. So … ” seagulls do it smiling” … that’s an entertaining little observation! But I’m worrying about all those towels!

    • HI John, lol, one can not have too many towels, no matter how one obtains them! šŸ˜‰

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