My words are neatly organized from thoughts
I gained in time, and follow grammar rules
to have them read and shared with you.

They may not always be the sentences
my mind would like to see,
nor meet your expectations,
but here, this much, is truth
as seen by me, improvement anyway
compared to chaos of a weary soul.

Extractions of my inner world.
So bear with me and know
I try to write how much I love you
but in a different verse each time,
where nothing rhymes, in longing for
your understanding of the whole.

Comments on: "Organized" (9)

  1. Nice sentiments. Sometimes the most basic feelings can be the hardest to convey, but you seem to make it easy.

    • Hi Michael,

      Thank you very much. I like to think about how language plays a part in our lives. πŸ™‚

  2. If you get to the whole, then the parts of the poem will follow. I like this, Ina.

  3. Another love poem. This one made me smile.

    Clearly the scent of Spring is in the air πŸ™‚


    • Hi David

      the sentiment we are the most intruiged by, is love I suppose. It is the number one theme in poetry!

      Spring is getting up my nose (literally, I was sneezing this morning. I never had hay fever I think? ) but it is the most beautiful season!

      Arohanui πŸ™‚


  4. Yes, I think we ‘understand the whole’ message! ‘Extractions of my inner world’ – I particularly like this line and is so true. We can never really get to know anyone other than ourselves… odd that. πŸ˜‰

    • Hi David,

      We can try to get through πŸ™‚ and basicly we all want the same things in life I think.

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