Bright,
as if it had never been here before
the light after a lovemaking hour
was peeking through the curtains, kissed your face
but you slept on, breathing calmly, your pace.
You turned, while I went to take a shower
only to come back, sleep with you once more.
Now,
light slowly leaves us alone to rest.
Your arms around me, I hear your heart beat,
a reminder that all this will go too,
but it is hard thinking of losing you.
I have to forget mortality, need
to think of the now, and hope for the best.
Bride,
is the word, and I was, I will be
your bride, in the morning, the night, the day
if you’ll have me, forever I shall be
your bride, and you will be lover to me.
Now sleep, I will wait, in my dreams anyway
till you come for more loving, gratefully.
😉
Comments on: "Bride" (19)
Ina, this is absolutely beautiful, dripping with feeling and emotion, a lot of truths encapsulated here, too, the fact that we’re here only for a short time.
Hi David,
thank you very much. I was a bit sentimental this morning 🙂 I am glad (and relieved lol) that you like it.
So little time to learn sooo much!
You’re very welcome, Ina.
Beautifully intimately expressed Ina.
Hi Walter, thank you very much! 🙂
This was the first thing in my inbox this morning, and it has set a wonderful tone for the day! I love it. Thank you for sharing it with us, Ina! : )
Hi David 🙂 thank you very much, I hope the rest of your day will be great!
Ina,
This is so lovely, full of emotion and I can so easily picture the scene from your words.
Your first stanza sets the scene perfectly and is just beautiful!
Love and hugs
Christine xx
Hi Christine,
thank you very much 🙂 In a few days (12) it will be our 12 and a half anniversary and this made me think about the meaning of the word ‘bride’. I suppose this is it? lol.
Love and hugs
Ina
Congratulations and thank you for the smiles this morning.
🙂 Hi Michael, I am pleased to have given you a smile!
What a beautiful, gentle love poem, Ina. It is a poem that tells us that long term love still means the most in this nanosecond by nanosecond world.
Hi Thomas, thank you very much 🙂 Maybe it does seem oldfashined, but I think that kind of love is great 🙂
beautiful poem, Ina!
groetjes,
francina
Hoi Francina, dank je wel! 🙂 Groetjes!
A beautiful, gentle, re-assuring love poem.
Loved it.
Much love
David
🙂 Thank you very much!
Arohanui 🙂
Absolutely, lyrically, simply beautiful! Speaks of both infinite and finite loving.
My favorite line:
‘I hear your heart beat,
a reminder that all this will go too’
Hi Diane,
thank you very much!