That day (2)

I cherish a picture
of this suitcase
open wide
empty
a spider making a web inside,
while dust is dancing in the sun.
The picture of that day
that moment
when no one was packing
yet

Comments on: "That day (2)" (4)

  1. Brilliant!!!

    You leave us with the ability to make our own stories.

    I would be pleased if I had written this.

    Love
    David

  2. I love this!

    It is definitely improved. I, too, would be pleased if I had written this! 🙂

    Love and hugs x

    Christine

  3. Hi Christine 🙂 Glad you like it.

    Love and hugs! 🙂

    I changed “sunlight” into “sun” it sounds better 🙂

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