kind whispers

The miss of you and who you would have been now
makes me think it would be nice to have a heaven in my mind
only for you to live on like forever.
A haven, a place for you. One of a kind.

Comments on: "kind whispers" (6)

  1. The opening line is worth the price of admission on its own, but the whole thing works beautifully. I absolutely love ‘The miss of you’ – that’s real poetry. I might be stealing that in the future…another super piece, Ina. It’s good to be back!

  2. Ditto gonecycling. But the whole poem is lovely and the last line is like a hug.

    Jamie Dedes

  3. Ditto everything Nick said

    Hugs

    David

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