~{}~
Give me one reason why you should love me
when all that I am is a mess
Tell me why you are not running away
or better yet, tell me not, more or less
.
Tell me not why you should leave me
Tell me nothing I don’t want to know
You say I am the most beautiful
And I think that you must be blind
You say I am the one for you
And I think that you are too kind
.
More or less a mess and loving you
More or less worthy of you
More or less and that is what we are dreaming of
Tell me we are not blinded
By love
~{}~
dedicated to my husband, who doesn’t speak English 🙂
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Comments on: "Just another love song but one straight from the heart" (14)
Blinded by love … there’s a beauty in it! As long as the two hearts are eyeless everything is beautiful … Touching poem Ina!
Your husband is one lucky man to have you write such words …
Hi 🙂 Thank you very much! Maybe he will let me know so, once he translated the poem 🙂
I agree: blinded by love…what a romantic sort of phrase. This is an excellent poem and tribute to your husband. Keep writing! You clearly have the gift.
-GD
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Thank you GD. I loved the music on your blog!
Another nice poem 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
This is a beautiful love poem.
It says a lot about the relationship you both have when you can write this poem after a lot of years together.
The sort of poem which inspires me to believe
David
Well we have been through life 🙂
Thank you!
Hi:
please forward the email to me, I did not request to ask you for your poem, yet, because of the incident, I can add you.
send your poem to jinglepoetry@gmail.com
Cheers.
officials have access to our secondary email accounts, someone is not loyal and try to hurt you and hurt our relations, please send the email request plus your poem to jingle
cheers.
always loved your input.
I will come back in a while. I just don’t understand what is going on right now. I liked to do the rally and potluck but this is way too strange for me lol.
I hope you will continue to have a nice community! 🙂
How sweet. You are very fortunate, Ina. : )
I know! 🙂