Night lover

~{}~

The silent mist could not cover

The morning took over the night

Day is not good for a lover

.

You sneaked out the door moments after

the bedroom was filled with new light

The silent mist could not cover

 .

In my mind where echo’s of laughter

but by then you had gone out of sight

Day is not good for a lover

 .

The working day soon became louder

honking traffic and citiy’s recite

The silent mist could not cover

 .

Still lying in bed I did wonder

had we done something wrong here or right

Day is not good for a lover

.

Sleeping till you came back and over

again day had turned into night

The silent mist could not cover

Day is not good for a lover

~{}~

Comments on: "Night lover" (11)

  1. J Sirrah said:

    Another wonderful poem 🙂 And a nice way to start this morning.

  2. sooo nice.. i really love it.. 😀

  3. belfastdavid said:

    I smiled as I came away from this.

    It has a wonderful flavour of illicit affairs, although that was maybe not what you had intended 🙂

    David

  4. Illicit, I looked it up; I like that thought 🙂 hehe. No it was all stricktly legal! Honest!

  5. cool villanelle. Kudos

  6. Loving your villanelles, Ina – the ideal form for building up a very satisfying tension in this encounter (illicit or not!)

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