The pillow note


all nights with you are like there is no tomorrow

moments as waterfall adventures by canoe

scents of earth and sin and sorrow

dreams of red and purple landscapes too

such moments of eternity and passion

and of all the nights I spent with you

last night  most memorable in its own fashion

so wake up! and let me show all my  thanks to you


I got an award! 🙂 The Celebrate poet of Summer award

entry for jingle thursdayrally

Comments on: "The pillow note" (63)

  1. belfastdavid said:

    I am awake, I am awake!!!! 🙂

  2. LOL! 🙂

    I was trying to be romantic. Not very good huh 😕

  3. Romance is alive! Wake up! Let me show you………….a generous heart full of love…………Loved your poem.

  4. nice one Ina

  5. This week we talk of different nights… I loved the first stanza: romance, adventure, scents, dreams and colors!

  6. Very nice. I was ready for sleep before I read this. Great write.

  7. precious moment captured here.
    well done.

    Happy Rally.

  8. i like this Ina……the pillow note…..

  9. Ina, romance like beauty is in the eye of the beholder. That speaks simply yet passionately. It gets to the point eloquently. Worth waking up for.

  10. you shine as always! congratulations 🙂

  11. Iris D said:

    Sweet romanctic poem.

  12. Sweet, romantic!

  13. appreciation, graciousness in those beautiful lines 🙂
    Thanks for the visit

  14. Oh how romantic 😀 The guy must be in for a treat? 😉 Lovely write Ina..

  15. lovely love note! 🙂

  16. Beautiful romantic =)

  17. ” … moments as waterfall adventures by canoe …”

    Hmmmm! 😀

  18. Such a sweet, romantic piece — loved it. 🙂

  19. “Scents of earth and sin and sorrow”… WoW

  20. nicely done! and good things must come in pairs as I named you for an award too! 🙂 check out my blog when you get the chance

  21. My first read “The Pillow Note”
    Definitely romantic
    My second read… yep, romantic
    Thanks for sharing


  22. A.B. Thomas said:

    Congrats on the award and I loved softer, kinder mood of the write!

  23. Like a lullaby! Beautiful 🙂

  24. ina, i love this.. show all the thanks.. hmm.. Here is my rally post, ~ come on idiot, you are for me ~

    ! Happy Sunday !

    Someone is Special

  25. The song of the morning. The phrase comes to mind after reading this.

    • Hallo Harry you were in the filter, don’t know why. Song of the morning… yes. 🙂

  26. Spell binding words!!
    Well said.. xx

  27. Hi Ina,

    Great poem! And congratulation for your award, well deserved. 🙂

  28. Thank you!

  29. Very sweet romantic poem Ina.

  30. Sweetly romanitic. Beautiful poem.

    Congratulations on the award! Good job.

  31. Ina,
    That was really romantic… Liked it…
    Have a peek at my blog whenever you find some time…
    Would be subscribing to your blog for further posts

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