Fool’s mate

~{}~

My first move was to f3

 your black dwarf on e5 and in my turn, I did g4

I was not expecting this to be!

You went  rolling  on the floor

Too soon even for finally

your queen laughed hahaha:  h4

A fool’s mate this will ever be

and me the fool of chess therefore

~{}~

😉

entry for jingle poetry potluck

image of chess game from wikipedia

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Comments on: "Fool’s mate" (37)

  1. anummunaf said:

    OMG !!!!!!!!!
    wow!!!!!!!!!!!
    so intresting 🙂

  2. thank you 🙂

  3. belfastdavid said:

    This made me smile.

    I taught my elder son to play chess when he was about 5 years old. By the time he was 7 he could beat me regularly 🙂

    Happy Easter to you too 🙂

    • 🙂 I love chess, my father taught me too. He once survived a taxi accident in Spain and to celebrate, he bought me a beautiful chess game, but I usually play on the laptop, a free chess program that was included.
      The poem could be better perhaps.I will try and change it a bit. 🙂

  4. entry for jingle potluck. I can’t get the link in the posting somehow. http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2011/04/poetry-potluck-muse-art-music-and.html

  5. Sina Saberi said:

    wow smart move 😉

  6. I loved it (wo)- man!!
    The image.. the words and the play- mind-blowing!!

    Very Intriguing.. 🙂
    Hugs xoxox

  7. A Check mate with this fine poem Ina… loved it …;-)

  8. Great visual effects and yes I have slipped into the fools mate.. once.. Not counting real life experiences.. lol

  9. I enjoyed your play on words and your take on life’s chess games. Hope you make the right moves. Keep on writing!!

    Iris

  10. interesting and original.. i am awed ina! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/13/a-chinese-love-story/

  11. happy queen! so fun mate 🙂

  12. Special moments deserve a special poem…

  13. Loved it so interesting

  14. OMG! Funny and fun! I barely know the game and I loved this one. You’re so creative.

  15. Ha! I am amazed by how poetry works here! Totally classic piece and I am very sure you are a very big fan of chess!;)

  16. a Chess -a poem -a play …clever thought

  17. wow, smart moves.

    love chess, well done.

    A++

  18. Creative thinking Ina, Lovely.
    Hugs.

  19. I can’t seem to fully load this post from my droid!!!

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