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Don’t go silently away
Please let me know
in advance
that it’is time to silently say
that you go
But promise to be back one day
if you have the chance
Silently go when it’s time for our eyes
after they’ve said all their soundless goodbyes
Silently go but
don’t silently leave
before saying to me
that you’d much rather stay
Tell it to me with your eyes
as I know they will tell me no lies
and it is them I can truely believe
when you leave
silently
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Ina 
Comments on: "Don’t go silently away" (18)
A beautiful love poem.
But sad too I think.
And I am left pondering the truth that eyes tell no lies
Hi David
Thank you very much 🙂
Eyes can deceive you though lol. This morning I thought I saw a big spider in the showerroom and I was all set to cry for assistance, (yes, I know) but it was a sock.
How strange.
I lost a sock in the laundry only last week 🙂
LOL that explains …
This is one of the most beautiful poems I read lately, but then I think I already told you that…
Well if you did, I can’t hear it often enough lol. Thank you very much! 🙂
Sad, but lovely just the same. Bravo!
Thank you! 🙂
eyes tell things…
awesome write…
A++
Thanks Jingle!
nice one ina.. and tq for coming by~ really appreciate that!
Hi fiveloaf, thank you very much!
It reads like a song, a very beautiful yet sad one.
Thank you mairmusic! 🙂
Fascinating and fantastic write, dour yet egnimatic in a way of the certainty that broadcasts without a single syllable….
Not sure what you mean but thanks 🙂
a dedictaion of love….havent read much love poems in awhile..thanks for this..
happy potluck, here is my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/03/secret.html
Thanks Chimnese!