Don’t go silently away

Please let me know

in advance

that it’is  time to silently say

that you go

But promise to be back one day

if you have the chance


Silently go when it’s time for our eyes

after they’ve said all their soundless goodbyes

Silently go but

don’t silently leave

before saying to me

that you’d much rather stay


Tell it  to me with your eyes

as I know they will  tell me no lies

and it is them I can truely believe

when you leave






Comments on: "Don’t go silently away" (18)

  1. belfastdavid said:

    A beautiful love poem.

    But sad too I think.

    And I am left pondering the truth that eyes tell no lies

  2. Hi David
    Thank you very much 🙂

    Eyes can deceive you though lol. This morning I thought I saw a big spider in the showerroom and I was all set to cry for assistance, (yes, I know) but it was a sock.

  3. This is one of the most beautiful poems I read lately, but then I think I already told you that…

  4. Sad, but lovely just the same. Bravo!

  5. eyes tell things…

    awesome write…

  6. nice one ina.. and tq for coming by~ really appreciate that!

  7. A.B. Thomas said:

    Fascinating and fantastic write, dour yet egnimatic in a way of the certainty that broadcasts without a single syllable….

  8. a dedictaion of love….havent read much love poems in awhile..thanks for this..

    happy potluck, here is my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/03/secret.html

  9. Thanks Chimnese!

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