Moment

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let’s just sit  in the dunes by the sea

nothing needs to be told

we shelter each other from cold

a ship in full sails to a far  destiny

as the waves sing their song

like drowned sailors who died a  long time ago

or are they just seagulls crying

let us stay by the sea

and listen to them

and don’t think at all about dying

not yet

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entry for jingle poetry potluck

Comments on: "Moment" (32)

  1. belfastdavid said:

    I am right there,
    by your side,
    holding your hand. 🙂

    Just out of interest where are your sea pictures taken? It looks like a place I would like to visit

    • Hi David 🙂 The pics are taken on the island here (Terschelling) , this one was taken last fall . As you see, no rocks, cliffs, not the dramatic beauty of your country at all, just a bit of sand but it is where I was born and always lived, so it is my home. 🙂

      It would be nice to have you visiting 🙂

  2. amen. lovely idea. a very beautiful and soothing poem.

  3. oh wow, this is so wonderfully serene! i’m loving it 😀 xx

  4. Thank you glitteringsootonhereyelashes 🙂

  5. Very sweet, Ina. Sad in some ways yet beautiful.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/14/valentine-card/

  6. Thanks Jessica 🙂 happy valentines day!

  7. poignant imagery! and, amen to your thoughts, ina. HVD to you!

  8. love it,

    sit by the sea and let time pass away…

    Thanks for sharing.

    A++

  9. Beautiful Life song.. 🙂
    You got to live a long life..!!

    Love xxx

  10. “let’s just sit in the dunes by the sea
    nothing needs to be told”

    Soul mates in harmony…a wonderful expression and poem…a very romantic and tranquil setting.

  11. You brought in dying sailors and then the sea gulls and I felt sad… but then you gave hope and courage with your words…

    ‘and don’t think at all about dying
    not yet’

    I liked it very much…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html

    • Hi Sashi, thank you so much for liking! You know, as a child I would listen to the sounds of the sea that the wind brought in and try to imagine that they were voices and sounds coming all the way from England lol.

      I tried to leave a comment on your blog, but was disconnected, so just put it here : you are a great poet!

  12. I love how they shelter each other from the cold and ship in full sail to a far destiny. Beautiful and emotional.
    here are mine:
    http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/goodbyes/
    http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/to-my-love/

  13. soothing as a love song
    lovely and melodious

  14. Hallo Butterflies 🙂
    That is very kind of you. Thank you very much!

  15. No, let’s not think about dying yet.

    Hope you had a wonderful Valentine’s Day …

  16. Hi Jamie, well it was cozy. Hope yours was nice too!

  17. Yes! I bought myself flowers and chocolate and watched a movie and that suites me just fine in my old age! LOL!

    Am searching your site for a poem I haven’t yet read.

  18. “let’s just sit in the dunes by the sea
    nothing needs to be told
    we shelter each other from cold …”

    love it … ~becca~

    http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/no-alarms/

  19. Ina, this is wonderful. The perfect moment, the perfect words…

  20. Thank you seabell!

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