Late December Visitor

 

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His face appears from long ago

And though his hair is whiter now

He is the same

 

His eyes say that all now is well

But tell the story of his life

He saw the world, he fought and fled

And wed a wife

That wasn’t right for him he says

But no regret

That  they have met

 

He‘ll  sail away on New Years day

Now  may he leave on New Years Eve,

The year will end with our farewell

A raven’s cry,  a nasty spell

 

I hope he ‘ll leave  me not till morning

And love again will be our haven

And the year will start so well

 

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Comments on: "Late December Visitor" (37)

  1. Loved this poem…thank you for sharing.

  2. Thank you 1meremortal! 🙂

  3. Very beautiful, Ina. Very poignant.

  4. belfastdavid said:

    A mystery story – you leave me intrigued 🙂

    Enjoy your New Year celebrations

  5. Hi thank you very much David 🙂 I hope you have a nice new year too!

  6. detailed yet dreamy writing,
    best wishes 4 u and 4 him.

    delightful read, thanks for sharing.
    Happy New Year!
    🙂

  7. Thank you Jingle and a very good 2011 to you too!

  8. Beautiful and haunting, Ina. I signed in with a new email addy, as the one you currently have for me has a nasty Dave gravatar attached to it, and I wouldn’t want to post that on your lovely blog.

  9. lol hi Didi and thanks 🙂

  10. This is poignant and leaves me with a lot of questions. Very well done.

    my rally: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/darkness-is-only-a-degree-of-light/

  11. Very nice Ina, couldn’t think of a better way to start the New Year.
    Have a wonderful 2011 Ina, thanks for stopping by 🙂
    http://words4afriend.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/a-place/

  12. Amazing, very well done. Encapsulates the New Year quite nicely. Thanks for sharing with us!

  13. A.B. Thomas said:

    A very intriguing and delightful write!

  14. Mystical..touchy and it is felt on so many levels, great structure and words are ringing in my ears..I LIKE IT A LOT..:)

  15. Very haunting and poignant. Well done!

    Happy New Year!

  16. Wow… I could see it happening while reading it! Good work!

  17. true love never dies… wonderous piece!

  18. Thank you very much everyone! 🙂

    Forgot to mention: this poem is an entry for Jingle’s rally http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/12/29/thursday-poets-rally-week-36-december-29-2010-january-5-2011/ 🙂

    ♥¸¸.☆*´¸.☆*´ღ`*☆.¸`*☆.¸¸♥¸¸.☆*´¸.☆*´
    ★[̲̅̅H̲̅][̲̅̅A̲̅][̲̅̅P̲̅][̲̅̅P̲̅][̲̅̅Y̲̅]★[̲̅̅N̲̅][̲̅̅E̲̅][̲̅̅W̲̅]★[̲̅̅Y̲̅][̲̅̅E̲̅][̲̅̅A̲̅][̲̅̅R̲̅]★
    ♥¸¸.☆*´¸.☆*´ღ`*☆.¸`*☆.¸¸♥¸¸.☆*´¸.☆*´
    ♥ 2011 ♥

  19. Hmmmm.. ecstatic!!
    Although I saw a few shades of sadness, but it had loads of hopefulness, confidence and assurance too.. 🙂

    Wishing you a wonderful New Year!
    Love n Hugs xxx

  20. nice….the visitor’s life through a poem.Liked it:)

  21. Excellent.
    A touch of tragic and beautiful writing at the same time

  22. Thank you very much!

  23. satanshotel said:

    Very touching…it makes me reflect on the strange ways people can seamlessly weave in and out of our lives.

  24. Thanks 🙂 Funny nick 🙂

  25. tuffi kaffa said:

    lovely piece, touching, dense, well crafted, thanks for sharing

  26. Thank you tuffi kaffa!

  27. wow,

    Thanks for posting one of those …
    Happy Thursday…
    you rock.

    attitude wins.
    😉

  28. elegantly described…really lovely writing…

  29. Thank you Británny!

  30. Sadly sweet and raises a lot of questions.

    Well done. Hadn’t realized you were with us at JP for so long. Don’t know how I missed you, but glad to “know” you now.

    Jamie

  31. Hi jamie, glad to know you too 🙂

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