Archive for December 10, 2010

Haiku or Naisaiku or Senryu

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nights without loving

cold shivering are my dreams

waiting for your hands

WAKING UP FROM THIS NIGHTMARE

loving hands waiting

nights shivering without cold

for my dreams are you

 

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This poem needs a bit of explaining perhaps: I wrote it as I found out about a new form of poetry and I wanted to do one too.

NaiSaiKu usually has the same lines in the first and second haiku but in reversed order.Β  This experimental form I saw at leo’s is about mixing all the words.

I used all the words of the first haiku in the second and devided the 2 haiku’s by a sentence of 7 syllables. Read more about this on Leonnyes site (see link at the bottom here) Leo is really cleverΒ  πŸ™‚

on this site

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