Archive for December 10, 2010

Haiku or Naisaiku or Senryu



nights without loving

cold shivering are my dreams

waiting for your hands


loving hands waiting

nights shivering without cold

for my dreams are you




This poem needs a bit of explaining perhaps: I wrote it as I found out about a new form of poetry and I wanted to do one too.

NaiSaiKu usually has the same lines in the first and second haiku but in reversed order.Β  This experimental form I saw at leo’s is about mixing all the words.

I used all the words of the first haiku in the second and devided the 2 haiku’s by a sentence of 7 syllables. Read more about this on Leonnyes site (see link at the bottom here) Leo is really cleverΒ  πŸ™‚

on this site

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