every life is you,
in birds you sing for me,
in flowers I can sense your scent,
I see you in travelling clouds
that never reach the Earth
and in every other child
there’s you.
every tear is mine
in rain they fall for me,
in morning dew they glisten
and you appear in every drop
that hesitates to fall
and in every other love
there’s you.
Comments on: "you are not dead" (16)
This is so lovely. Gentle, Romantic,sentimental, loving, soft and warm
That”s what I think anyway:)
Love and hugs xx
Hi Christine
thank you very much!
Love and hugs xx
So very special are your words this morning, a beautiful joy to embrace my morning…thanks Ina!
Hi Wendell
I am glad you like, thank you!
Wonderful. This piece has such sentimental clarity about love. Real.
Hi redplace
thank you very much!
This is beautiful..comforting…
Hi Clarice,
thank you very much!
This is indeed beautiful and universal in character.
Hi David
thank you very much!
A lovely poem Ina.
Hi Harry
thank you very much!
Beautiful, Ina. So much that is nature-al is reflected in our emotions. So many lovely lines in this poem, like:
‘I see you in travelling clouds
that never reach the Earth’
and
‘every tear is mine
in rain they fall for me,
in morning dew they glisten’
Very lyrical, very heartfelt.
Hi Diane
thank you very much for your wonderful comments!
Your thoughts on eternal love draw one in…
Hi Lindy Lee, thank you