I saw him when he was already dead a while
so he apologized for being smelly
and he didn’t take a seat, nor coffee
for apparent reasons, I didn’t need to ask.
We talked a bit about what went on in life
and then he left, walked out the door.
So stupid that I forgot to ask his address
and where about he does hang out these days.
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Brilliant! One of your best.
Hi laird Will, thank you very much!
Certainly gave it a third and fourth read. Esp thought provoking for me as find out Friday mother has but a few weeks to live. Both parents had lived with me last 10 years.
Hi Carl, I am sorry to hear that, wishing you and your family all the best for the coming time.
This is quite surreal – a new departure I think, Ina? It’s both funny and black.
Hi John
Yesterday I got a link to the blog of Kim Moore where there was a poem by the Dutch poet Jan Glas http://kimmoorepoet.wordpress.com/2012/08/11/poem-by-jan-glas/ an absurd but great poem, and this poem fell into my mind when I read his
I love the hirpling delivery of the last two lines, and the whole damn metaphor.
Hi kvennarad
thank you very much!
Beautifully enigmatic. . I don’t know if you are published or not, but I hope you are
Hi Peter
but not this poem (yet) .
thank you very much. Yes I have!
Is the title on your blog. Being paticularly thick today. Sorry. I’m not surprised BTW. You have a real abililty
I did a book with 160 poems in English. The book is called “Veritas” http://wintergoosepublishing.com/authors/ina-schroders-zeeders/
Thank you!
and a poem of mine was published in the magazine “The Journal”, 2 other poems will be in anthologies this fall, I shall do a posting about all of this
A rather matter-of-fact mystical experience … so you, Ina! LIke it very much.
Hi Diane, thank you very much
A missed opportunity for the answer to the big secret…
Yep..